Potential for World Class?

Potential for World Class or Not?


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World class is a super high standard and I'm certainly in no position to judge. Compared to the very best deciduous trees worldwide, probably not I guess, there are lots of truly astounding trees out there.
Nice though, I really like it, many faults listed by others don't bother me in the least, wouldn't mind seeing the subtrunk develop a bit more of a crown of its own.
 
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If this tree is what I think it is, it is not deciduous, and the ramification on this specimen is better than anything I've seen on any other.
 
Thanks everyone for the Votes!

The whole point of this thread was to get folks talking about and critiquing Bonsai, and what it is that they see as making good material and what they see as not making good material.

As I said in the opening post, Yes, this tree is not World Class. For some perhaps they could see that with future development it might have potential to become so, for others not, and for others still, I get the feeling of this being more of a personal issue, and more of what I can only imagine might be a vote in opposition to perhaps what they thought, I thought was great work? It is nice though to see a couple of folks who have me on their ignore list took the time though, to cast their vote!

I think that the vast majority of the comments were very insight full of what everyone sees and distinguishes a good tree from a bad.

For some, these were more cosmetic, and had to do with appearance... and could be fixed with little effort. Such things as the bright white lime sulpher, which could be easily toned down or the color changed in it's entirety. The pot, which one could repot. Or the carving of the deadwood and it's tool marks which could be soften with some time or further work. And lastly the addition of moss to the soil surface.

For others, there was more technical aspects, the roots or lack of roots on the left side, that could be addressed given time, not knowing the species of the type of tree, this might take a very long time and alot of work... in this case the tree is a tropical and sends out alot of fine roots at the surface, so a couple of years? The chosen front, the argument being the trees are not separated. I put this here and not under cosmetic, because yes it would be very easy to repot with a slightly different front, however, this might require a bit of work in the design of the rest of the tree, ie... the branches and their placement. Would like to note one of Walter's Maples posted has the same "hip striding" back trunk view he has chosen with to be his front, so it does work, but could be changed. The taper issue of the deadwood/trunk.... If one looks at the width of the base and compares it to the width of the top, there is taper, seeing it is smaller... if one would like more then the deadwood could be carved more to do this, or the height of the tree could be raised. One could wire up a leader and do so. This would take some more time, but certainly a possibility. Lastly, the issue of taper and ramification in the branching... this would take some time, one would either have to allow the branches to grow out, or allow for sacrifice runners to shoot off the ends with the idea they would remove them at a future time.

All of these issues brought up are issues that everyone making a World Class tree would have had to work on and deal with. They would of had to do root work, branch work, taper work, height adjustments, etc. Dealt with cosmetic issues, recarved deadwood, and yes... Even mossed their soil. This is just the reality of making a tree good... So, it seems we still need some work on what to look for in determining what makes a piece of material a good choice for a good tree.

Now, with that said, their is another issue some brought up and I feel this has more to do with actual "perception" and perhaps our thoughts, of what makes a good tree... often this is regional or more to do with "common" knowledge of a particular region.

Some examples given were that only Conifers make World Class trees, which is not true. In fact it would probably be safe to say that conifers only make up about a quarter of the World Class trees, if that. Then there is the notion that a tree styled as a deciduous tree cannot really have massive amounts of deadwood, that this belongs on conifers... this is not the case as well. Where I live Tropicals grow in the shape of and have deciduous branching, yet are full of deadwood. Will often have sharis, jins and small live veins running up the trunk just as conifers might have. The vein running up the front of my tree is totally natural, I killed off no live areas of this tree, the tree itself grew like this and is typical of this type of species. Here we also do not always have deadwood that looks like that of conifers, instead what one will often find is damage done through insects such as carpenter ants and termites, animals and birds all making holes and carving paths through deadwood, as well as rot due to the conditions of our environment and it's moisture. So, often our deadwood will not appear the same.

Then there is the idea that I see happens alot in Bonsai, I see this on this forum, on the web, when I travel around to various events, and this is the notion that only the best of the best of Artist can make a great tree, or World Class tree. Here again, I think this is not true... sorry if one disagrees. I see folks from all over the World, most of whom nobody has ever heard of creating quite Remarkable trees!
I think if one brings forth the mindset that it cannot be done, it will not be done. I think if we spent less time telling folks they can't do something or that their tree is not good, and more time discussing the way it could be improved, we might get somewhere.

Thanks to all who participated!
The tree was a Durantra Erectra, Golden Dewdrop. Virtually a species unheard of in the Bonsai World. In fact I know of only a handful of folks who have done any serious work on them they are in Mexico and Taiwan and in Tampa, for those of you who thought my work was serious. They put out fruit in the form if yellowish orange berries and have purple/blue flowers, or white depending on the variety. This tree was shown won a couple of years back in one of the competitions we had on here, was displayed at Epcot at the Japanese Pavilion for the flower and garden show, was displayed in Saratoga Springs, NY at the ABS Annual Convention, and has left more than a few folks dumbfounded as to what it was. Even caught Bill Valavanis off guard, which in itself is an impossible task, he knows just about every type of material out there!
 
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That's a pretty cool story about the deadwood. Very few broadleaf trees I'm familiar with preserve such large amounts of deadwood - buttonwood, pemphis, european olive, a few others. I've never heard of Duranta Erecta - so there's another one for my list.

You discussed branches and branch placement - for me, that's the thing that I really look for in a broadleaf tree because it's so difficult and takes so much time to obtain the level of refinement that I associate with a world class tree. If I may, I'd like to highlight this statement because, at least for me, it's something I look for that separates the men from the boys, so to speak. Here are two broadleaf trees that have won the Kokufu prize:

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The first is a Japanese Maple, the second is a Trident. Consider the branches on these trees. Movement right from the start. Branching close to the trunk line. Continuous taper from the nebari out to the tip of every branch. Branch size decreasing all the way up the tree. Dense and full ramification. Seeing them makes me want to go out and throw away 1/2 of my collection. Few of us have the skill to pull this off and I've seen very few trees in the US that have reached this level of refinement. Whether or not these trees appeal to our specific tastes, I think any of us that have grown these trees can appreciate the patient and dedicated effort that has gone into achieving these results. For me, these are world class broadleaf trees - they do not exhibit the gaudy beauty of the yamadori conifers (I like them a lot too), but I have much more respect for the patient skill that they demonstrate.

So why don't we see more trees like this in the USA? I've seen a few spectacular ones but, frankly, I've seen far more great conifers than great broadleaf tress. And it's not just a question of material - I haven't seen many examples of a high level of refinement on a poorer quality trunk either.

Scott
 
That's a pretty cool story about the deadwood. Very few broadleaf trees I'm familiar with preserve such large amounts of deadwood - buttonwood, pemphis, european olive, a few others. I've never heard of Duranta Erecta - so there's another one for my list.

You discussed branches and branch placement - for me, that's the thing that I really look for in a broadleaf tree because it's so difficult and takes so much time to obtain the level of refinement that I associate with a world class tree. If I may, I'd like to highlight this statement because, at least for me, it's something I look for that separates the men from the boys, so to speak. Here are two broadleaf trees that have won the Kokufu prize:

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The first is a Japanese Maple, the second is a Trident. Consider the branches on these trees. Movement right from the start. Branching close to the trunk line. Continuous taper from the nebari out to the tip of every branch. Branch size decreasing all the way up the tree. Dense and full ramification. Seeing them makes me want to go out and throw away 1/2 of my collection. Few of us have the skill to pull this off and I've seen very few trees in the US that have reached this level of refinement. Whether or not these trees appeal to our specific tastes, I think any of us that have grown these trees can appreciate the patient and dedicated effort that has gone into achieving these results. For me, these are world class broadleaf trees - they do not exhibit the gaudy beauty of the yamadori conifers (I like them a lot too), but I have much more respect for the patient skill that they demonstrate.

So why don't we see more trees like this in the USA? I've seen a few spectacular ones but, frankly, I've seen far more great conifers than great broadleaf tress. And it's not just a question of material - I haven't seen many examples of a high level of refinement on a poorer quality trunk.

Scott
Thanks for the reply, I would agree.
All of the Branching that is apparent in my tree's photo had all grown within the last 2 years before.
This was a stump with not one branch. So, if they had all grown within the last two years, what would the tree look like in 10... 20 years?
I merely asked if the tree had the "potential"...
 
Markyscott,

The Japanese Maple is in that pot that the owner rents out. I believe the rent for one Kokufu is $100,000! Every year, someone rents it. And everyone speculates on what kind of tree it will hold.

Matt Ouwinga has a trident ROR with ramification like these two. That's about the only one I know of.
 
That's a pretty cool story about the deadwood. Very few broadleaf trees I'm familiar with presrve such large amounts of deadwood - buttonwood, pemphis, european olive, a few others. I've never heard of Duranta Erecta - so there's another one for my list.

You discussed branches and branch placement - for me, that's the thing that I really look for in a broadleaf tree because it's so difficult and takes so much time to obtain the level of refinement that I associate with a world class tree. If I may, I'd like to highlight this statement because, at least for me, it's something I look for that separates the men from the boys, so to speak. Here are two broadleaf trees that have won the Kokufu prize:

View attachment 85176 View attachment 85177

The first is a Japanese Maple, the second is a Trident. Consider the branches on these trees. Movement right from the start. Branching close to the trunk line. Continuous taper from the nebari out to the tip of every branch. Branch size decreasing all the way up the tree. Dense and full ramification. Seeing them makes me want to go out and throw away 1/2 of my collection. Few of us have the skill to pull this off and I've seen very few trees in the US that have reached this level of refinement. Whether or not these trees appeal to our specific tastes, I think any of us that have grown these trees can appreciate the patient and dedicated effort that has gone into achieving these results. For me, these are world class broadleaf trees - they do not exhibit the gaudy beauty of the yamadori conifers (I like them a lot too), but I have much more respect for the patient skill that they demonstrate.

So why don't we see more trees like this in the USA? I've seen a few spectacular ones but, frankly, I've seen far more great conifers than great broadleaf tress. And it's not just a question of material - I haven't seen many examples of a high level of refinement on a poorer quality trunk either.

Scott
Hey, Scott I wanted to address one more thing in regards to your post and your question of why we don't see trees like this here... alot of this has to do with our understanding of what makes good bonsai and is very much a regional thing.

For years here in the States, there has been a big interest in negative space... I think alot of this thinking originated years ago with Naka... we have all heard the allowing for birds to fly through comment.

If one was to go back and look at pictures of bonsai here in the states from the 70's and 80's there is so much space that there is hardly any tree! I said this before, when I saw some of the trees out west, at the ABS / GSBF Convention, the first thought that came across my mind was all of the trees I saw needed tightening up...

So, to answer your question, alot of why we don't see trees like this here in the states has alot to do with more our understanding of what makes a great tree.

I still see alot of this older, philosophy still being taught by alot of the professionals out there still at shows and demonstrations till this day... they remove way to much branching coming off of the trunk. And sadly are still going with the old left branch, back branch, right branch mentality...

Why? I think alot of this has to do with this generation seeing older images of older designs from places like Japan... that were out of touch from where the current Japanese were at... they had moved on. With the Internet things are fast.

A lot if these trees have issues where these professionals here, have told folks to remove... a lot of the branching coming off of the trunks would be considered bar branching to most here, because they are of to close of proximity. So, they would be removed. So, there i believe is a lot more behind why u do not see them here...

Often, when I see trees like these or one's coming out of Taiwan, or even the maples Walter Pall has posted here, I see so many issues that most here would consider wrong! I see things like what most here would consider bar branching, reverse taper, crossing branching, to many branches protruding from an area, the lack of negative spacing, to much of a helmet look, etc... but the trees are great trees, and really don't have these, it is just our outdated thought of training, that is teaching most this.

Good news is that I see alot of things changing here... I see folks starting to push new boundaries here that were not here before. One of my personal favorites is the examination of new angles and views one can pot at to add to a better tree...

Thanks for the post, one of the things I have been pushing here for a long time and the reasoning behind a lot of my threads, this being one of them... the questioning of what we are all doing, the logic that has come before, and how this can be expanded... so that we can progress.

How many folks voted no... my tree could not have future potential to be a World Class tree, Why?
Either they answered without reading all of what I had posted and did so because they saw World Class tree in the question and my tree was not that, even though i said it was not in the opening post... or, voted so because the tree did not fit the teachings of what we teach makes a good tree... so the tree had no potential. I think we still don't fully recognize how we can completely change and alter material. My tree with work could have the branching and ramification of the trees you posted. Someone created them, so why could not one create the same thing on the tree I posted? Same with the nebari, one could remove, replace and grow roots, as I said in my closing post, this is all things people do to create World Class trees.
 
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