Eric Schrader
Chumono
...personally I think over time you have allowed your tree to go beyond where it should be. By letting the crown grow out too much the proportions you now have, have diminished the impact of that magnificent trunk which is the absolute best part of this bonsai. ...
We all have the tendency to let our trees develop beyond our original vision, I know I have and I am now having to deal with the result of that.
An interesting, and somewhat unexpected consensus on the favored version of the tree.
I do agree that the crown was too heavy for the 2013 show - not because it got away from me but because when I styled it in November 2011 I kept more branches than needed. The editing of branches after this January's show was an improvement and I will consider further reduction of the crown at candle-cutting time in June.
Cheers,
Eric