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Here is what I am kinda thinking...
I did remove some of your bottom left jin, which I felt was a little to intrusive into the placement of the branching on the left side. with this virt, I did not bring the branching down on the left, which could be done. I left your top leader for the most part as is... added some more foliage on the right side. added a tuff of foliage right in the center of the trunk to brake up the continuation of the trunk as previously mentioned... I see you do have some foliage above, so at a future time perhaps a branch could be brought down into this area? Lastly there is a section right smack dab in the center of your trunk that I feel could really use a little hollowing out... not obviously a hole all the way through, but a recess the mimics the recess directly above and helps break up the straightness of the trunk, giving a swoop to the left.