thank you. i do plan on working something into the right side, i’ve been slowly working in down to little by little. i hade that long cascading branch, but it didn’t have any long shoots close back to work with (plus it was way to tick for me to bend). i plan to work a long branch from the back that’s really thin into that space, i just don’t want to over work anything atm.
i also like your idea of jining the top down some, i can see it.
up there…?Looking good! Sometimes doing a little work here and there helps open up new design possibilities
In addition to jin near the apex, I like the idea of shari that continues downward from the apical jin. Or a trunk split in the top third of the tree. This could also solve some of your lack-of-taper issue — anything that reduces the visual mass up there will (in my opinion) be an improvement.
Good work mate, looks healthy.
I don’t know what you mean by that. The work that was done is an incremental step toward a final design. If you want to offer criticism or to tell us what you would have done, please try to be clearer?
