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Jin is the Japanese term for dead branches and trunk that are left to tell the story of tough times and survival. Rather than just cutting a redundant branch right off we strip the bark off to kill it then cut back to the desired length. The dead wood can be worked with carving tools or fibres stripped with pliers to make it look like it has weathered and maybe partly rotted - as natural as possible which does take a little practice.
Shari is the term for dead areas on the trunk of the tree. In the clumsy virt I have painted the dead areas white as old dead wood bleached by the sun. Note the dead part (jin) on the left trunk continues down the trunk some way (shari) to include one or both of those lumps. This should disguise one or both. To reinforce the theme of struggle and survival I have also jinned the top of the remaining right trunk above the branch I left to grow the new canopy. you might even connect the 2 dead jins with more shari to tell the story of massive damage at one time but the tree has survived and grown back from one branch on the remaining live trunk.
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Shari is useful to disguise thickened areas on trunks. When the wood is white our eyes take less notice so the reverse taper, while still there, does not sand out to the viewers. If the reverse taper problem still persists the thickened areas can be carved and hollowed as if they have rotted away naturally - problem solved.
On this tree, other branches might be formed from any new shoots which will surely grow when an olive is cut back severely, such as the yellow area I've added lower on the right side.
Note that I've also tilted the tree a little to bring the new apex above the base and balance the new design a bit.
All these ideas will need to be modified depending on the actual shape of the tree and what grows well after pruning. Apex may very well be larger than drawn, more branches added as they sprout or in different locations, etc. Lots of possibilities and no one answer is correct.
Thanks for taking the time and the great suggestions. I will proceed as suggested an u believe it'll make a very interesting tree but also woyld be great learning for me. Do you think it's better to cut and him at same time or cut now and wait a few months to see where i get new growth and jin accordingly ?