Rob_phillips
Chumono
That is some sound advice and i will over time look into making some changes i would imagine a more crunched up version of what i have could work and i will definatly look into that in some way.Ok, you have a nice little tree. I’m going to say a lot of things about it... please don’t take offense. All the things I’m going to say are about ways to improve it. (We’re always improving trees! At Intensives, Boon shows us pictures of Kokofu winning trees, and asks his students (us) what they would do to improve it!)
So, first thing you should decide is whether you want a tall literati style tree, or a shorter twisty tree.
A taller literati should have a rather sparse canopy, with a lot of negative space, dropping branches to convey a feeling of great age. Now good literati have tall, slender trunks. Usually graceful, sometimes more angular. Your tree starts off down low with dramatic movement, which changes to more serpentine up higher in the tree. It’s a rather different feel up in the canopy than down below. And then, some of the branches up in the canopy appear to be rather heavy when compared to the girth of the trunk.
For all those reasons, I think crunching it down would be the better option.
Using a jack and guy wires and rebar, you ought to be able to shorten the whole tree. Probably several guy wires. And several sessions of crunching! Don’t try to do it all at once, crunch a bit, wait another month, crunch some more!
The next thing is the branches. The trunk has lots of curves, but the branches look to be fairly straight. Whatever forces are at work making the trunk curve would be acting on the branches, too! Make ‘em move!
This is only my second year in the hobby so being able to reach out and have trees critiqued by someone will help me in the long run be able to spot and execute these types of changes to improve a tree from the material i am working on. But this will take time and im sure I will make alot more mistakes in the future.
So i understand that so thank you for your honesty on your reply and i will get to work on researching and evaluating this tree and see if I can put some of your ideas into play in the next few years. So thank you.