even better Conar as deshojo is one of the most sought after varieties, highly prized for bonsai training
I have a deshojo and it looks like a deshojo to me !
this is a basic setting of structure/primary lines. you cant fully style a deciduous tree with the leaves, when the leaves are off is when you can see what youre doing properly, a full styling involves wiring every twig. deciduous trees are fully appreciated for the winter image, only then can you carry out intricate wiring. i do basic wiring jobs in summer, i wire out trees fully after leaf drop when i can see what im doing.
theres a few bits in there that are wired, but still dont appear to have much movement in.. to style a tree properly you want to be looking at the tree from your chosen front.
looking up into the tree from the base, but you also need a plain back ground and a naked tree to really do it properly.
good start tho
Any further comments, are welcomed.
Hi Conor - what are your plans for this part of the tree?
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To my eye it is very straight and lacks taper, branching or movement. Do you see this as an issue? If you do, how do you plan on addressing it? You might consider that the taper of the lower trunk (at least from this view) seems to suggest a shorter tree.
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If you were to consider extending that taper vertically, where is the point where the two lines converge?
Scott
Hi Marky, thanks for the response.
I've no problem being honest and saying I didn't think of it as a problem, prior to you pointing it out. Everything you say is true, it lacks taper and is quite straight. My original plan was for a taller tree, I would like this tree to remain taller.
Im going to MS paint, my thinking, so ill post that shortly.
I was thinking and now hoping that a flaw like this could go unseen once branch structure takes over, unseen when leaves are on of course, much more seen in winter image, but hopefully not too bad?
I think the only way of resolving this would be to cut that long section in half, or shorter which would kinda of remove the taller tree image.
I think what I am asking, is do you think this flaw is enough that I should seriously consider doing that work, or is it small enough that it is forgiven? Im for picking my battles lol.