Bonsai toto
Mame
This is what I think when I see your tree...
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I would increase the planting angle to get rid of the horizontal trunk line down towards the nebari. This also increases the energy of the design.
Right now you have a ball of foliage that would need to be pulled way in. I started the process in this virt, but I would go even further.
Thanks Bonsai Nut for your effort to create this. This one definitely will be take into account to be one of the possible choices for the final design...from that simulation, I can see the back trunk canopy as well, along side with the top and bottom jin movement bending forward towards the viewer just nicely for the overall movement.
THANKS BONSAI NUT!
cheers,
Toto