but moving it right doesnt make the trunk less straight for this material. its always gonna be a straight, heavily tapered formal upright style trunk. if one is going to move a tree right, one should also take into account the form of the roots. as a slightly leaning tree is more convincing if the nebari is more powerful on one side, in this case a stronger root spread on the left, a bit like the hornbeam i just shared. to me it looks like its toppling over now. sort of like the leaning tower of pisastraight trunk is fine if you want the straight trunk style
I like the tilting, more dynamic with the left-ward apex. Then I might notch the first branch down. The first branch is the focal point to counter the apex
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I like the third one but there needs to be some balance. As is shown in the third pic, you would need to take out something on the right side mid tree.Thinking about future development of this tree.
I did a virtual of some top structure that I hope to get in place over the next year. Eventually I want a broad, wide canopy around that structure, but that'll take years.
Then I messed around removing a couple branches to see how it might look. I like the middle image best. I hear a lot about asymmetrical design these days (which the third image provides), but for some reason the symmetry of the middle image works for this tree.
Would be interested to hear anyone's thoughts.
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