Hey folks!!.
New to the forum. Been on a couple other forums but this one seems a lot more Active.
Looking for some "styling tips" on this little boxwood. I've been staring at it for Weeks and I haven't been able to come up with a plan for it. I think it has a good nebari, nice trunk, but It has imho, way to many vertical trunks and I just can't envision what this little guy wants to be (or what I want to will it to be).
Most of the exposed branches are pretty stiff. I can get maybe an "Inch" of movement from them.
It has 3 Main branches in the front, and 3 in the back. I'm not sure whether I should cut the rear branches? Cut the front center branch? As I said, i'm just not seeing a lot I like, other than the nebari and main trunk.
This is what I started with
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Got it to here:
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And this is where I'm at now:
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Thanks for any Insights!!
You made some typical beginner mistakes:
- of not having a plan or a drawing of what you were trying to achieve
- removing entire branches when you should be shortening them
- removing lower foliage and over exposing the trunk
- trying to use the whole tree in the design.
When you take a piece of raw material like this, the bonsai tree is somewhere in the
lower 1/2 to 1/3rd of the plant, closest to the soil.
- that means that the lowest branches are the most valuable on the tree (they are typically the hardest to replace or grow back, so should not be removed lightly)
Here's something I wrote for reddit /r/bonsai subreddit
Simple raw-plant/bush to bonsai pruning advice
- You need a plan BEFORE you start - it's highly unlikely that the bonsai tree inside the bush simply jumps out at you and absolutely not as a beginner.
- It's best to make a drawing of what you think it will look like first
- Try to remove as little foliage as possible to achieve the design
- My guess is that every 20% of the mass you remove is at least a whole year's worth of growth!
Focus initially on getting the proportions right:
- The target height is something you decide based on the girth and movement in the trunk. A rule of thumb is 6:1 - trunk girth to height.
- before you remove anything you need to rotate the plant and look at it from all angles, moving branches aside to get a good idea of what's there.
- Move foliage around and shield pieces with your hand to imagine what the tree would look like without that piece of foliage/branch.
- Target height will almost never be more than 1/2 of the original plant.
- Low branches are more important than high branches - you need to have at least one which starts no higher than 1/3 of the target height.
There is an implication here, that since the original height is 2-3x taller than the target height, your lowest branch must start in the first 1/10th to 1/6th of the original height!
get your head round that for a second - if I have a raw tree 25cm/10inches tall, I need a branch which starts somewhere between 3-5cm/1 to 2inches from the soil! That's why good material is hard to find.
Failing to get this proportion correct (i.e. choosing the wrong starting material) is a fundamental failure amongst most beginners. They see the original plant as the whole thing and later the proportions are all wrong.
And then simple pruning advice:
- don't remove branches, just shorten them - you can always remove them later but you can't stick them back on.
- work your way from the outside to the inside, reducing the length of the branches (and thus the amount of foliage).
- wire branches into place if they are not perfectly positioned, don't remove them!
- never remove all the foliage from a Juniper branch - it will kill that branch
- do not remove secondary and tertiary branches which are close to the trunk - these can/will be vital later.
- The tree needs branches all the way round - so shorten a branch a bit and then spin it round and do the next one and then spin it.
- do not expose the trunk on one side - that's a mistake.
- do keep spinning the tree - it is best to leave all your options open on the "front" until later into the pruning.
Hope this helps.