2025 New Year's Haiku Contest

[G4G523]

Hoping this is one


Here sits a bonsai waiting for me

Through rain and sunshine

Shaping, Cutting and chi

 

[Wulfskaar]

Hoping this is one


Here sits a bonsai waiting for me

Through rain and sunshine

Shaping, Cutting and chi

Welcome to B-nut!
Not a proper haiku, man
But that is okay.

 

[Desert O'Piñon]

Hoping this is one


Here sits a bonsai waiting for me

Through rain and sunshine

Shaping, Cutting and chi

It's a nice sentiment, and I like the rhyme. But a haiku is a 3-line peom, in which the first and third lines are 5 syllables, and the second line has seven syllables.
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