It probably could use a reduction on the right side where you see the bigger gaps in secondaries, right above the main branches.
That might get solved with bringing the pads down to hide the branches as bleu suggested.
It seems soon you could begin cutting cutting back to forks, getting a more evenly divided ramification.
But hell, the first thing I noticed in the last pic was the great balance of masses from low trunk, foilage and Jin, this is excellent.
Really awesome. I'd love to see the clean version.
Sorce