I don't comment much but will do so. These are just my unrefined "feelings/opinions" about the trees and hope they are taken as such. How is that for a pre-emptive looking to be all fair opening?! LOL
I really enjoy the work you do in all aspects from art to trees to stirring the pot. I really like these two trees and can defiitely see the progress you are making as a bonsai artist getting your style.
Tree 1:
I like this tree and on first impression it is great. However, after looking at it more I wonder why that branch would grow down so radically when the tree does not seem tormented or struggled. It seems to go against phototropism and struggle to imagine where I would see it out of pot. I still like it, but a s bonsai not a tree. (no debate etc etc starting)
Tree 2:
Shut The Front Door!! Dude this one kicks arse with a capital A. I can see how this tree is trying to grow out the bottom of a hill after a rock fall that knocked it out of place breaking some bones. FANTASTIC and well done.