A little sub-alpine fir

[mrfish33]

This is a sub-alpine fir I harvested as a yamadori (roadside transplant permit). These young sub-alpine fir are very flexible and seem ideal for bunjin aka literati. I wired for a few months, just de-wired, then added guy wires to shape it lower and further back. Feedback is genuinely appreciated.

 

[Dabbler]

I can't say I'm in love with the S curve you have going on, Maybe add some bends to the side as well to make it a little more dynamic.

 

[mrfish33]

I can't say I'm in love with the S curve you have going on, Maybe add some bends to the side as well to make it a little more dynamic.

Agree. Another angle has those bends. I will work on that next and likely repor to the better angle